Hi I am new here and would like to ask the community for advise. I interviewed 3 rounds and then got a job offer. they asked me what my range was and I said 70-75k per year (hoping I could get 65)
then he send me the offer with 47k.
now with the help of a friend I am trying the collaborative negotiation method and saying this:
thank you very much for your offer. I'm glad your interested, and I am interested too in joining the Xxx team as a 3D Design & Implementation Specialist, and therefore relocate from Berlin to Munich.
I hope we can work together to meet each other on the salary, as well as other benefits such as relocation assistance or other options that might help reflect the higher cost of living in Munich.
With over 5 years of experience in the industry, I am confident that I can contribute to the company's success and growth. My extensive knowledge of the industry, understanding of garment making, as well as 2D and 3D CAD software will enable me to excel in this role working with multiple XXX cross-functional teams and influential external brands.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am excited about the opportunity to work with you and your team and look forward to finding a mutually beneficial solution.
Happy for any thoughts or proposals - either by email or over the phone.
what do you think about the bold part?
thank you for any thoughts!