The first chapter of my novel

If you're a book lover I'd love to hear your thoughts on my debut novel's first chapter ☺️

here's the link:

ps: it's not yet been published

amazing congratulations on this amazing endeavour, Ifeoma! I tagged Asks and Show elpha for increased viz!
Ifeoma,First of all, the cover art is amazing! Second of all, it's sooo good! I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
thank youu! the book should be available on amazon in December
Congrats on your first novel! Looking forward to the rest.
thank you so much :)