My first presentation at my new job! Can you give me feedback!

Hi everyone,

I put together a powerpoint presentation for a new role I am in- my first presentation ( 15 mins)

Would anyone be willing to go through it with me to give me feedback to make sure it

  • it flows
  • is interactive
  • caters to different learning styles.

Hi! I would be happy to go through it with you.
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