Smart bra to assist women during their self-breast examinations. Rate it 0-3 👙 3-6 🧨 6-10 🎀https://www.triwiglobal.com/

AlaraAkcasiz·Feb 24, 2021

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Hello everyone,It's me again 😋 Can you go check the landing page for my wearable device startup? It's a smart bra to assist women during their self-breast examinations. Please provide feedback and subscribe 😍

teresaman·Feb 25, 2021

Thanks for sharing Alara! First off, I'm a huge advocate for the smart bra that you're working on, or truly, anything that helps with breast examinations. Every time I go to my ob/gyn I embarrassingly tell them no I haven't been performing self-checks before either I'd have forgotten to, or that I never really know what to look for other than feeling around for lumps.As for your landing page, my only feedback is around the section where you're showing your blog posts as well as Instagram posts! It wasn't immediately clear that those were the content types and I had to click to find out that they were different.Good luck with building the smart bra!

AlaraAkcasiz·Mar 04, 2021

Thank you so much for the feedback. I will definitely update this!

Larissa88·Feb 25, 2021

Great initiative and product! I’m so bad at checking myself and my grandmother died from this thing so I know I need to get better. As far as the website goes, the “challenge me” button prompts me to download the Wix app. Not sure what that’s about?Cheers!

AlaraAkcasiz·Mar 04, 2021

Hey Larissa! Thank you for taking the time to review the page. The App is just to grow a community of habit building. Did you find it too distracting?

Larissa88·Mar 04, 2021

I just don’t know what it means. Why do I need to download a Wix app? There’s no clarity on what that button is supposed to do.

AlaraAkcasiz·Mar 04, 2021

Ok thank you! Will work on that CTA

LaurenDolnick·Feb 26, 2021

Hey @AlaraAkcasiz - I test this on every website I visit (whether because I'm interviewing or if it's a request for an audit) - don't type out in all-caps. It's not ADA compliant. Well, that may be an American acronym, but I'm saying it's not accessible. People with screen readers will be yelled at.Do you know CSS at all? If so, identify the areas that you want displayed in all-caps:text-transform: uppercase;Type your copy out normally, but that'll make it appear in all caps.Actually, it appears you have that set up (at least the header to sign up for the newsletter). Don't type in caps but since it appears to already have the coding set up to that design, they should appear in all caps!Also need to update your copyright to 2021!(A lot of companies missed both things I've talked about, not just startups)

AlaraAkcasiz·Mar 04, 2021

Lauren this means a lot! I didn't know any of this. I'm updating the landing page, thank you!