We need honest Feedback on our Landing Page pleasehttps://magicbell.io/

ChristianeCollinge·Nov 04, 2020

Posted in:B2B SaaSy Elpha Beta Testers Favors Startups

Hello Elpha Community!I hope everyone is doing well. We are a Start-Up from Barcelona, Spain. We'd love to get some feedback on our landing page.* Can you understand what we do?* What problem do we solve and which products/ companies do you think we compete with?* Would you consider using us based on the landing page and if not, what would be your apprehensions?Thanks a lot!Chris

teresaman·Nov 04, 2020

Some quick thoughts:Visually, I absolutely love the clean design and strong branding. I find everything very easy to digest with great clarity and information hierarchy!From a product perspective, I think I have a bit of trouble thinking of how it can be applied to a product, so I'd love some kind of example / use case section that outlines examples of "channels" for instance that Magic Bell would be helpful in. (Though, I may be the wrong audience and maybe it's obvious - but I couldn't immediately think of a use case)Edit: OK, I just clicked on Why Magicbell and the post clearly answered my question above! 😆This is sooo helpful! I've been quite annoyed with my Slack notifications in which I've read the messages on desktop but still get them on my phone. I wonder if there's a way to reiterate a summary of the article in the landing page itself :)

ChristianeCollinge·Nov 05, 2020

Thank you so much for the feedback. It is so helpful. Most people won't click further, therefore you are right, we need to improve the landing page!

AlessandraEsse·Nov 04, 2020

Hi Chris!Absolutely love the idea :)))))The layout is clean. I like the colors and the logo. Maybe one suggestion I have, is that the so called "above the fold" (what I see without scrolling) should already contain a message about what your product does. The fact that the two short title and paragraph there contain 3 times the word product is a bit distracting. And the sentence that describes what the product is about, is maybe a bit complicated? I would try to think of something simple that goes straight to the point and captures attention.Either than that I love everything :)

ChristianeCollinge·Nov 05, 2020

Thank You very much! This is so helpful!

Frantang3·Nov 06, 2020

* Can you understand what we do? Yes. I'm in D2C but I imagine this is for SaaS! * What problem do we solve and which products/ companies do you think we compete with? At just a quick glance it sounds like your product is almost a plugin for any software to handle all the notifications that software offers to it's users. * Would you consider using us based on the landing page and if not, what would be your apprehensions?hard for me to answer since I don't have a SaaS company, but in theory if coding out the notifications was really rough, it would make sense that this is a nice plug and play option (we sell on shopify and use plugins for a lot of things in lieu of having them coded so...makes sense from my limited POV!)